If he thinks it's all girlish and moody - then he's been reading far too much V C Andrews!
As for ""She looked out the window and saw the reflection of her own pale face against the drifted snow." Something girlish and moody like that."
Has he read Robert Jordan? I put the whole thing down as the MC desperately tries to find his wife in the blood splattered halls....and then stops to look in a mirror and admire his own reflection...and then resumes his desperate search! *shudders*
Yawn! If it is meant to be satirical, the author should have amped it up a bit. Lame, lame, lame! IMHO that is :P
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
no subject
Date: 2009-01-15 12:54 am (UTC)From:If he thinks it's all girlish and moody - then he's been reading far too much V C Andrews!
As for ""She looked out the window and saw the reflection of her own pale face against the drifted snow." Something girlish and moody like that."
Has he read Robert Jordan? I put the whole thing down as the MC desperately tries to find his wife in the blood splattered halls....and then stops to look in a mirror and admire his own reflection...and then resumes his desperate search! *shudders*
Yawn! If it is meant to be satirical, the author should have amped it up a bit. Lame, lame, lame! IMHO that is :P